Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Revised Paragraph Chapter 11

Driving down the street in my bright blue sports car, I saw a car coming rapidly around the curve. The car maintained speed as it approached the red traffic light, where a young couple started crossing the street. The woman saw the car and yelled out to her husband who leaped onto the shoulder. Seconds later it was obvious that the man was fine but, the woman was not. I hurried to a nearby emergency phone and called the police. Even though the ambulance arrived within minutes, the woman was already dead. The driver looked terrible, and failed the sobriety test and later the police discovered that he had two previous offenses. It's apparent something more must be done to get drunk drivers off the road.  

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